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"Write me a poem," she said - my fucking wife,
leaning on the kitchen counter like a Saturday afternoon.
But it was Tuesday and there was blood -
and dirt, there was always dirt in those days -
under my nails from working goddamn hard for her.

Those were still the days of her warm cunt every morning,
my profanity whispered to the ribs under the weight
of her left breast like a goddamned prayer.
Those were the better days and I tried to find rhymes
Between my teeth just for her mouth, her lips, her tongue.

But there ain't no escape from meter gone off-balance
and an ambitious woman climbing above your head.
"Write me a poem," she said - my fucking wife,
and I tried it just for her hair wrapped up in my fingers
as she knelt on the tile like she was worshipping -

Not just my cock but the way things were between us,
ripe and drunk and soaked in purple dye like her lacy things,
frivolous bits I could peel off her like skin falling from its fruit.

She got her poem, verses strung out of me like a junkie
and I wonder if she kept it - hope she has it like preserves
to spread on thick slices of bread on rare cold Georgia mornings.

Date: 2010-01-21 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dctr-mccoy.livejournal.com
Goddamn, Leonard. I like this.

Date: 2010-01-21 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rn-chapel.livejournal.com
This is really powerful. I'd say you're better at poetry than you think you are.

Date: 2010-01-21 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] original-fine.livejournal.com
Have to agree with the above. This is very moving.

Probably helps I know what your wife looks like, but still.

Date: 2010-01-21 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadianbill.livejournal.com
[ooc: This is awesome. I can't really comment ic because Bill would probably think it sucked because of it not rhyming, but it's awesome.]

Date: 2010-01-21 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kirktastic.livejournal.com
...Wow. Pretty damn good there asshole.

(OOC: ....daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn!)

Date: 2010-01-21 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loyalty-ever.livejournal.com
Strong arrangement! I like it.

[ooc: AWESOME. MOAR? ♥]

Date: 2010-01-21 03:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] nawigator
Wow, Doctor, I can not profess to be much of a vord-vise inclined person myself, but I like this. It is wery good.
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